What you've made, though, is unclear.

Heaven, Paradise, that holy place in the sky--this "Heaven" is a very disputed thing, though many can agree it's apparently a very desirable outcome. So desirable, in fact, its mere existence can impact how people act, and what they say, and how they exploit. Heaven has been turned upside down, some say; violence is rife in its name. Something better, nobody seems to be quite sure how to get there, though, perhaps it's through obedience--perhaps it's through wealth. Perhaps it's a matter of belief; if you believe you'll get to Heaven, you will--there is no way of telling for sure.
Though one thing is clear: this thought of Heaven is a bane on the peoples' minds, it's a bane on the desire for change, and it's a bane on the poor bastards who would rather live a better life.