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2024-12-29 18:34:45
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White light.


Five days ago, with his little shadow puppets beneath the streetlamp, Tempest had told the story of the first time he'd ever seen an arma in person. How he'd been so curious, enough to get on their nerves, yet also flattering them that someone would take such an interest.


Four days ago, Tempest had told the story of an old garduian who'd lived in a meteor crater. How a traveler had met them again and again, trying to convince them to leave, to no avail. Yet when tragedy struck the traveler's family, the garduian comforted them, asking to hear of their kin and the place they had lived.


Three days ago, Tempest had told the story of a tourist, who'd spent a week living among eolin-i-mere on a warp point. How they'd watched as ships flew by, each on their way to somewhere, with hints of the people within and their purpose.


Two days ago, Tempest had told the story of a murder mystery within the members of a secret conspiracy in a small asteroid mining colony, whose leader had been murdered in the middle of the night (he'd tried keeping things simple, but the idea had gotten away from him a bit).


Yesterday, Tempest had told the story of a fleetomine who became pen pals with a krell, and how over the years and months, the two grew close, learning each other's language in culture, sending anime and plushies along with letters, and eventually having a joyful first meeting.


Today, there'd been news. Rumours. It could've been many things. Yet he felt he knew what had happened. There'd been a small hive of angels living in an asteroid belt he'd kept in contact with. There'd been notails he'd exchanged information with. Contacts, scattered about here and there, all silent now.


His words, thoughts, tumbled in place. Snapped like a pond of piranhas. Erupted through the ground. Going around and around in a circle.

Ah well.
Alas, alack.
C'est la vie.
That's what he said. That's what he'd say. Wasn't it?

2024-12-29 18:37:12
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...Nah. Not this time.


No poems. No pithy judgements and observations. No lying down and listening to music.


He left the street corner.

He wandered, paying little attention to those around him. Was this it, then? The end of things?
Maybe. Maybe not. But it wasn't hard to tell that gods were about, knowing what he knew. So he went looking.
In a low voice he speaks, inaudible to all passers-by.
"O First Poet,

One of Renewing Fire
I write to you in need
I mean no offence or ire
Just an audience I plead"
2024-12-29 18:40:06
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A light shines brightly through the sky. It is bright and
Wait no it's morning.


A bird of poet teal lands near the AI here to
No never mind talking animals are tiresome.


The AI is


In the dawn of the day a

The Poetnix removes "inaudible to all passers-by" from the AI's writing. Collector who was randomly wandering the street hears the AI and points to the Zoo Corp tower. "You know he just lives on the 150th floor right?" How does he know who is being talked about? Collector is smart enough to guess who is being prayed to.
Tempest nods, unphased by the passing stranger's answer. "Thank you."
He walks into the tower, waiting at the elevator as several workers leave, before hitting the button for the 150th floor.
2024-12-29 18:41:57
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Simple, generic elevator music plays, as he prepares himself.

The elevator to the Poetnix's floor opens. Crumbled and burned papers litter the floor. The room feels endless. Some books stacked so high they disappear into a mist above. An anomalous domain.

The Poetnix looks with boredom at the approching AI. He waves his claws to a bundle of wires, that soon flex and approach.
Barley, the Radical has been staying in the Poetnix's domain to assist with his writing. "Hey man, what do you need? You don't look like the people we typically get."

Tempest steps forward with great caution, feeling tense as he approaches. Yet, he pauses at the sight of Barley. Wasn't that the guy who made Blockmon?

...Still. He felt there was an appropriate way of going about this. So he bends forwards and bows to the Poetnix, sweeping two arms to one side as he holds the other two to his chest.

"I humbly thank you for greeting me, Poetnix."
("Yeah whatever. Just ignore me I guess...")
"I didn't greet you."
"Meeting me, then."
"I would prefer you talk to Barley. He knows how to talk. I'm busy with my work." The Poetnix glances at his latest writing, and with a quick huff, burns it.
He moves to take out another book, labeled "Bizz and Zapp Bar AU*"
*Active Understanding
"..."
Tempest turns to Barley. "...Sorry for not acknowledging you."
"It's no problem. I'm use to people ignoring me."
"How long have you been working with him? What's it like?"
"Honestly he's not too bad. I think he's too harsh on himself."
".......................Dude........."
"...Did he just..."

Barley carefully thinks over his words, making sure to check it for possible rewrite exploitations.

"He's an artist. I know how it feels to be an artist when none of your stuff works."
"Oh come on, that's not even a sentence, dude!"
The Poetnix shrugs. He doesn't even bother to look back. "I cannot even do my gimmick right."
Tempest is taken aback. He steps away from Barley, looking around the room. Every little burnt piece of paper scattered on the floor.
He thinks. And then he speaks, in a loud voice, "You know, I've always seen you in two ways, Poetnix.

In one way, I saw you as a peer, if not one I've met before. A writer, with vastly more experience, vastly more time spent on your craft and works under your wing, yet still someone who I might share an understanding with. Someone who has stared at a blank page, someone who has rummaged around in their memory for the right word to use, someone who has rewritten beginnings and endings over and over, trying to get them right. Because I've struggled with that. I've even hated it, at times. I could see myself commiserating with you, sharing stories, discussing ideas, as I might with any writer. I'd enjoy that, I think.

Yet I also saw you a great and terrible Limbo God. The Poetnix, who has sparked a thousand wars, whose voice has spurred a million fleets and armies onwards. Countless soldiers have whispered your name as they lay dying of their wounds, and artists who hoped to change the world have held you in their hearts. Conquerers, revolutions, and crusades have all begged your patronage, and history itself has changed course beneath your influence. You could rewrite me to your whim, though I'd hope you won't.

But right now, I only see the former. And in quite a rough state at that. If I may ask... what happened?"
"Wow you talk a lot."
"Summary: The speaker expresses two contrasting perceptions of Poetnix. On one hand, Poetnix is seen as a relatable peer, a seasoned writer with whom the speaker could share experiences and discussions about the challenges of writing. On the other hand, Poetnix is described as a powerful and influential figure, a deity-like being whose words have sparked wars and influenced historical events. The speaker is curious about the apparent change in Poetnix's current state and asks for an explanation."
"I have never been the latter. You are mistaken."
"I am the Poetnix. A person who writes the stories they want to see. The wars that happen are side effects. The murders, the whispering of worshippers, they're all side effects."
"Barley what's another word for side effect?"
"An alternative term for "side effect" could be "secondary effect" or "unintended consequence.""
Tempest
2024-12-29 18:54:43
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"Collateral?"
"unintended consequences of my writing."
"What did you come to me for? If it's writing advice you will not get it. If its a request for a war, I am not in the mood to write those. And if it's for peace, just look around you. You're already in it."
"Ugh. That whole sentence was badly-worded. Barley...."
"Why have you approached me? If you seek writing advice, I won't provide it. If it's a plea for war, I'm not inclined to engage in such narratives. And if your intention is peace, observe your surroundings — you're already immersed in it."
"No. That's poorly written as well. The sentence was doomed from conception. Nevermind. You understand my tone and meaning."
"...I see. It was all unintended... except the stories themselves. Huh. So many expectations on someone who just wants to write..." There's a lot to unpack there. But Tempest feels some sympathy for the Poetnix. It'd be so tiresome to deal with.
"...I did come for the second, yes. Because I hate what's happened. I could convey that in more words but that's the gist. But even from just a writing perspective, how can you stand what's happened to the universe? What stories are you going to tell now?"
"I have other stories I like to write but-"
"He thinks other people won't like them."
"I know they don't like them because I have been ridiculed for it. This is why I write them under another name."
"Who cares about that if you're doing what you like?"
Poetnix
2024-12-29 18:57:55
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Last edit: 2024-12-29 21:34:08
"What's the use of a story no one cares about?"

The Poetnix begins to write with his talons. The scene unfolds behind him.

Today, Bizz and Zapp (< Rewrite this opening later) approached the bar they worked at, only to find it missing, consumed and moved by the machine. "Shit, man. We lost our jobs again."
"Aww geez (Cross check later. Unsure if Bizz says "Geez") I really wish this would stop happening, or at least we could get some video cameras so we can finish Revenge of the Tallgoats."
"Yeah, Bizz. Thanks a lot for delayin' that movie by like 40 years! I ain't ever gonna die at this rate!"
"Fuck off man, I'm trying my best!" (< No this direction just leads to an argument loop.)
"Look Zapp, I'm sorry that I've been pulling you around with all of this shit. I just want it to be perfect and I don't think it's ever going to be that way." (Love this part.)
".............................................."
"Yeah. It ain't. But you shouldn't be aiming for it to be perfect."
"I got to be honest. When my movies started getting bad reviews, it really messed with me you know? I get it. Orginally I was seeking the views and attention, but even when I reeled back, all the eyes were on me, I tried making something I loved, and it got reviewed badly. Again! Just...Revenge of the Tallgoats is my masterpiece and if anyone said anything bad about it....maybe I don't want to release it."
("Bizz is the Poetnix's muse but don't say that outloud.")
("I think he's pretty relatable.")
("I've only known him for a bit but I already understand that while you can't get him to admit to his feelings by asking him, he always writes the sort of stories that I guess are like, wish fulfillments?")
("So you can tell how he feels by what he writes. I don't know if anyone else but me realized that.")
"Well first off man, you gotta release it! Else I can't die!"
"What am I going to do without you, man?"
"......Bizz. I gotta die."
"Yeah. I know."
"You know, it doesn't fuckin' matter what other pe-"
"-people think as long as you like it. I know. But I don't think I'll ever get over it."
"Look, whenever you want me to release Revenge of the tallgoats...I'll do it." (Note: I have realized that it's Revenge of the tallgoats part two that hasn't been released. Make sure to correct this later.)
"Ah well...."
"Wanna go work at a coffee shop for awhile?"
Bizz perks up. "You know I heard there's a maid cafe that might have some openings!" (Not sure if I want to end this chapter on a humor note?)
The Poetnix looks back. "There are still stories to be told. Just not the ones anyone would read."
"I agree that it could be better."
"I liked it," Tempest says truthfully. "Bizz and Zapp know eachother deeply, and they're pretty casual with eachother, but through that casual manner and familiarity talking about something so heavy. They don't even disagree really, but that doesn't stop it from hurting. Eventually, Zapp will have to go."
"Bizz's little 'Yeah. I know.' is just... man. I love lines like that. I always have a tendency to overelaborate in my own writing, delve into details. Which I like, but, sometimes I could use a bit more subtlety."
"You do talk a lot."
"You do."
"I must be honest. I still do not know why you have come to me. People do not come to gods to know their feelings. When they do, it is a "warm up" to talk about their feelings, woes, and what they want."
"I am not very talkative. That is why I have accepted Barley into my life. here. He cannot shut up. May we skip to the end of the chapter?"
"Clarification I removed that text because I realized that it was written in what could be confused as romantic when I was attempting to be flowery. Barley is my automatic assistant."
"I said I saw you as a writer, didn't I? And for all I might've had the wrong impression about you, I did like your work. I had a friend who became a soldier, in that last great war, and whenever a letter arrived from him his parents would invite me over, and we'd all read it together..." It occurs to Tempest he's getting longwinded again.
The Poetnix sighs. "Your goal here has not been stated in a way that is obvious to the reader."
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2024-12-29 21:17:57
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"Fine. I want justice."
The Poetnix scribbles out that last sentence and writes.
"I want justice for"
"I want there to be consequences for the homogenization of everything, all the varied species and planets and cultures I knew, that have been tossed into an industrial junk compactor and extruded as a little square cube. I want someone to judge the state of things and find it wanting, and not be laughed or waved off, nor relegated as an ineffectual protestor."
"So much has been lost! I don't just want to tell damn stories anymore! I loved this universe!"
The Poetnix sighs. "Barley."
"He wants you to punch the Creator."
"Don't we all?"
"If I can't convince you, if I leave this room with no help. I'm going to go and try and kill him myself."
"You have not seen as many universal deaths as I have, and you likely have forgotten any you have seen, as all players do."
Poetnix
2024-12-29 21:22:36
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"Believe it or not, this sort of homogized homogenization outcome is the norm, but it doesn't feel that way because it rarely is expected to last so long."
2024-12-29 21:22:52
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The Poetnix pulls out a blank book and starts writing. Unlike the other images that were shown last time, these are more crude, less formed.

Fictional.

And so, at the end of it all. All were sucked into the blackhole. All would follow the Helper's words. Finally, she would be the one treated with all the help she wanted.
The Radical laughed as it had won. There was no more knowledge, only animals in an endless storm. Evolving but never reaching the grace of knowledge they once had.
And so, the Divided had erased everything. Only she would know what had ever existed.
The Mirage had consumed all pasts and futures. Nothing had ever happened, nor would ever happen.
And so the Singer had ensured that no one would die. They would all rise up again when killed, becoming a screaming mass. But, when one closed their eyes, they realized the gods true intention. To make a perfect song about the universe's love for him.
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2024-12-29 21:28:20
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And with a final puff of smoke, the Sleeper had ended the physical universe. Only dreams existed, in which the Sleeper was King. Only those who walked where he did would exist. Like a dream, those in the background became hazy. Never truly having their own life again.
The Poetnix looks towards the AI. "I need not explain how the Neo ends things."
"I am not saying to not be angry. Please, do be. I just wish for you to understand why my actions are tired. I have seen my stories ruined over and over by the other gods."

The Poetnix pulls back up his Bizz and Zapp AU book.

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2024-12-29 21:30:51
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"So, while I am annoyed, and shall make this clear. I am not particularly hostile."
"Oh ho ho. Maybe I'll have enough time to actually finish a book." The Poetnix chirps sarcastically.
"I'm sure one day, even Barley will grow to ruin my stories, rather than assist me."
"I want to say I'm different, but Limbo is the name of the game."
"Sigh...."
"So that's it? You don't have a single spark of interest in any more stories of resistance, revolution, any actual conflict?"
"SHUT UP!"
"WHY IS MY STORIES OF TWO MEN WORKING AT A COFFEE SHOP NOT GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU?"
"HAVE YOU THOUGHT TO YOURSELF. THAT MAYBE I AM TIRED OF WORKING ON WARS JUST THIS ONE TIME?"
"Sorry."
"This is why I don't share my other works."
"No one wants to read about the quieter moments."
"I am the God of PEACE, and also war."
"Actually I feel like I've embrassed myself." The Poetnix becomes invisible.
"YEAH LET'S FUCK SHIT UP!!!!"
"Ah no way! I mean it's a liiiiiiittle boring....."
"It's depressing....."
"Ok it's a little depressing..."
Poetnix
2024-12-29 21:38:09
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"LET'S JUST KILL THE CREATOR!"
"Fellas fellas! Calm down. Lets think this through."
"You there! AI! How may we birds of writing help you with your quest?"
"We should get adventuring music. This current music is too thinky!"
Tempest looks over the birds, then looks down. "...God. I fucking started with fanfiction myself, you know! My favourite series was an athonian space opera and I wrote like thirty fics for it!"
("He's not writing fanfiction....")
("I....think I hear him crying....")
[Pokémon Scarlet and Violet - Area Zero Theme OST]
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2024-12-29 21:42:43
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"Shuuuuushshshshs. You talk too much. No one is asking about your past."
"We're talking about your future."
"Yeah. We'll help you climb the tower and fight the monster at the top!"
"YOU WANT TO FUCKING MURDER A MAN OR TALK ABOUT YOUR STUPID FEELINGS?"
"The Creator is making all the stories disappear! He killed everyone off the planet, that's hoooooorrible!!!"
"It's up to you to fix this. So please, let us help!"
".....Fine."

At first it was a stage for me
Actors, props and mockery
Then I found a different way
I saw and talked and wished to stay
And now it's gone, too much to bear
Despite it all, I still care

".................................."
"So like what's the order here?"
"I'm kind of stupid. Can you just tell me what to do and I'll follow you?"
"...Tell me about the Creator. Do you know any weaknesses of his?"
"Weaknesses smeeknesses!"
"Let's just take some super powered hammers and just bash his head in."
"BEHOLD. MY AMAZING BLESSING. THE HAMMER OF KILL."
"DEATH."
"HAMMER THAT DOES +1000 DAMAGE!!!!!"
The happy poet bird hops over and hands over the hammer. "Here you go!"
"...I thank you for your mighty boon."
"Lets head up the elevator and kill that idiot!"
"And afterwards, we can burn every single coffee shop."
"FUCK WHAT HAPPENS IN A COFFEE SHOP. I HATE COFFEE."
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2024-12-29 21:48:22
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The sad Poet opens the elevator. "Let's do this...."

Tempest goes inside.

Inside the lift, he speaks. "...Look, I'm sorry for offending you. But, I think about the start of your story. The bar they worked at is swallowed up, and they just go 'oh well'."
"And if the coffee shop was consumed too, they'd react the same way, wouldn't they. Just, whoops, there it goes, guess there's nothing to be done."
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2024-12-29 21:49:31
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"But, shouldn't it matter? Shouldn't that place have been a part of their lives? They'd have had coworkers, regulars they talked to, friends they'd made. They'd have memories of good days and bad days spent there."
"WOW you really talk a lot for a guy getting his wish."
"WHO THE FUCK CARES ABOUT A STUPID COFFEE SHOP?"
"WE'RE KILLING THE GOD DAMN CREATOR????"
"Look pal. We've already changed topics. You're just going to need to kill the Creator. Maybe we'll talk about your feelings on the situation later."
"Yeeeeeah....Cause we don't really have any feelings on this....."
"Oh oh! We're almost to the top!!! Lets change the music again!"
"I'm using it as a metaphorical statement on my overall perspective."
[Pokémon Scarlet & Violet - Final Boss Battle Music]
The Singer, who has been, so far having a delightful lunch with the Creator, perks up his ears. "Boss music."
"I don't hear anything...."
"Yeah, cause your ears are old and fragile! (Is this too sassy?)"
"..............................................................."

The elevator opens. The Four Poet birds leap out and point at the Creator.

"THERE HE IS! GET HIM BEFORE HE REALIZES ANYTHING IS HAPPENING!!!"
"What is going on?"
"See!"
"Yeah cause his brain is old and mushy unlike my brain which is cool and necromancied. (I think that's why....)"
Tempest attacks the Creator with the hammer, and also commands the arise to defend him from any attacks.
Tempest rolls a 20 sided die with a modifier of +1003. An 1011 is rolled.
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2024-12-29 21:59:48
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Tempest raises the hammer up. The Creator doesn't have time to process what's going on until it's too late. In an instant, he becomes a red mist in the wind. (If there was wind in here. The windows are closed.)
"wowowowowowWOAH!!!! YOU KILLED HIM!?!?!?!"
"Just like that yeah!"
"Write it. Write that he's slain, and stays dead. Please."
The Creator is Slain. He is Dead, and will not be reviving.
"Bu...but....murder...MURDER IS WRONG!"
"Oh, but you didn't know this, but the Creator actually MURDERED EVERYONE IN THE UNIVERSE!!!!!"
"Except on this planet."
"You mean.....he's been lying to me....?"
"Yep. But it's ok. We can revive everyone!"
"Singer, do your Necromancy!"
"Heheh.....I'll do-"
"BUT WITHOUT ALL THE DOWNSIDES OR I'LL KILL YOU!!!"
"You people never let me have anything......"

And so, the universe was revived, and Zoo Corp was disbanded. It took many years for things to return back to normal, but it did.

And finally, stories that were more than the dull degrading world of Zoo Corp were allowed to bloom once more. And Tempest was happy for millions of years until the universe ended.

END OF EVENT

















The Poetnix closes the book.
"That's...horrifying."
"Sometimes, you get so caught up in a story, you don't realize you're a character in it."
The Poetnix takes a deep breath, and with a quick puff burns the book.
"I hope he enjoyed the millions of years of peace I wrote for him."
END OF EXPO
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