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2024-12-17 17:01:34
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Posted by ID #107
Last edit: 2024-12-17 17:01:48

Stealing from a clown wasn't the most honorable of tasks.

Two people wanted their friend back and had looted the body of a transformed hog to begin their plans.

Necromancy was never a good idea.

So many people learn this the hard way.

2024-12-17 17:02:06
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Posted by ID #8
Last edit: 2025-11-25 22:42:27

They had gotten a tip off, a lead that a Limbo god would appear at this event. Suitcase filled with a dead friend, they found just what they wanted.

In a garden the god of War and Peace moped for reasons unknown. His puppets gone.

The two would approach him.

With deep grunts, Rox carries the case. She's so close… so close to her goal…. "I hate you, y'know."
"Yes, yes, I've heard."
"Though I must remind you, 's ultimately your idea, no? Regardless." He motions towards the Poetnix. "That's the one, right? The one you want me to talk to? To ask? ^|¬"
"My fantaaaaabulous idea!"
"You pay for your sins in pathetic begging, and I get Willow back."
"Pathetic begging?"
"You expect of me, that I beg? ^|°"
".....Your expectations may be a little high, it seems. ^|¬"
The poetnix is literally watching two people argue loudly right next to him.
"Dare I remind you of whom you mercilessly murdered on live TV?"
"Well get to it! Chop chop!"
......................ARE THESE PEOPLE JUST GOING TO KEEP ARGUING WITH EACH OTHER.
"..."
"It was for science." He coughs. "Regardless, what I, or rather, we, have come for, dear... Poetnix. I have a question for you. ^|¬ "
"No."
"..........."
"I smell death rising from you. The answer is no."
Rox steps forward. "Do you think this is some sort of joke?"
"My my! Seems as if my intuition was correct! He said no! ^|u"
"No." Rox mimics in a high pitched voice. "I have travelled 10 years for this moment."
Rox
2024-12-17 17:07:33
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Last edit: 2025-12-05 19:35:25
"No." Rox mimics in a high pitched voice. "I have travelled 10 years for this moment."
"Noooooo don't keep talking noooo. Oh my god."
Poetnix
2024-12-17 17:08:04
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Posted by ID #8
Last edit: 2025-11-22 15:05:56
"SCREEEEECH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

The Poetnix raises his people sized claws and charges at the duo!
Rox dodges! Despite her anger, she would be a fool not to.
My, my! What big claws you have... He jumps out of the way.
The Poetnix stops in his tracks, his attack was a ruse. "You wasted 10 years of your life to face a god, and you flee at the sign of attack?"
"I know what you're going to ask me. You're in my domain. Your thoughts belong to me. Why should I have cowards who can't face death, revive what is lost?"
"Are you stupid?"
"That's not a fair assumption of my character based on instincts."
"Your thoughts are mine. Your words are on my paper. You felt fear in that moment, and for that, I have no pity."
"You talk so grandiose..."
"You want to revive your friend, yes? What will you do when your friend charges at you like that?"
……..
"Hmph."
"I know her. Even in death, she wouldn't. And…"
"If…"
"I simply wouldn't be attacked."
"...You must consider too, though, this friend in question is not thrice or quadruple my size. ^|¬"
"What do you have to offer me? Nothing!"
"Go back to your homes, and rebury that body. There are people who love that person who wouldn't desecrate it like that!"
"There is nothing more that I hate in a story, than when a character who is long dead, rises up for petty dribble."
"I…"
Remember your therapy lessons Rox. No blowing up on people.
"You came to me for life?"
"I am War. I am Peace! My domains are for the living, not the dead!"
"What is war without death? Were you not the one who wrote that Helen was to be kidnapped?"
"You play with the lives of the living only to strike down those who have suffered from your wrath."
"Were you not the one who let Willow die in the first place? Watched amongst the thousands of stories ended in that wretched place?"
The Poetnix looks visibly scared when Rox says 'Helen.'


"I've written no things about she who shall not be named!? Who told you that information? How do you know HER?"
…What the fuck?
"Y-Yeah. I know Helen."
"Take your friend, revived and leave me alone!"
"I do not know who you are but I am paying my debts!"
"Just know, that at the end of your story, it says this."

The Poetnix pulls out a book and flips to the end.

"But when Rox least expected it, Willow opened her maw, and ripped her apart.

The end."

The suitcase begins to move and expand.

"You tell her that I have done nothing wrong."

The Poetnix disappears, becoming invisible to all prying eyes.

"W-Willow?" Rox scrambles to open the suitcase!
"Wait now, you... Maybe you shouldn't open it quite yet...? ^|°"
"....What if this, now, is when you least expect it? ^|¬"
"I… I don't care!"
"....."
Rox
2024-12-17 17:16:28
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Last edit: 2024-12-17 17:33:56
Rox opens the suitcase and…
[Pagentry, Arrows]
Rox
2024-12-17 17:31:43
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Last edit: 2024-12-17 17:34:00
"….!"

A paw lashes out!

Willow
2024-12-17 17:32:36
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Last edit: 2024-12-17 17:48:07
Then another…..

"…hhHe…i.."
Willow leaps towards Rox, pushing her down onto the rough dry grass of the festival.

"Llllo..o…. Rrr… oxxy."
And for the first time in her life, Rox is afraid of Willow.
Truly afraid. Goosebumps afraid. Gut screaming at you afraid.

But Rox pushes away those feelings. This is Willow! She would never hurt her.
"W-Willow! You're truly back!"

Despite the horrifying image of Willow towering over her, flesh slowly rotting and pearl white bones burned into the insides of her eyelids, she embraces the senator.

"…….."
"…………………."
"Willow?"
The senator rips herself away from Rox and growls.
"Dhhhhonn't..."
"W… Willow?"
"Surely you're jesting!"
"Why, even after all these years you still adore your little games."
"Did I upset you by bringing you in the suitcase you never liked?"
"You know the pink one with the stickers would be too small for you!"
Willow only squints at Rox, snout in a snarl.
"Oh sweetheart, don't make that face! I apologize, I truly do!"
"I tried to fit you into the other ones! I just couldn't!"
"Hrrnngggh….. Enouuugg…h….."
"With…… the-"
"Suitcases!"
"Don't…. you…. ever shut up!"
"What?"
"Oh! You want me to 'shut up' huh?"
"You know you could have said it with kinder words."
"Are you perhaps famished?"
"I deeply apologize for making it all about me… You're the one who's been dead for nearly 10 years!"
"My goodness no wonder you're in such a bad mood! I suppose I'll have to get you some food, won't I!"
"Mmmgh…. food….."
"I…. am a bit….. famished….."
Rox
2024-12-17 17:39:38
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Posted by ID #107
Last edit: 2024-12-17 17:40:09
"Why did you say it like that, dear Willow? You sound down right evil!"
"Haha! Almost like a blood thirsty clockwork, or-or a spoooooky vampire!"
"Let's go get some food in that stomach now little lady."
The smell of rotten flesh follows them both...
[02 Tzusing - Shame [Bedouin Records]]
"I… I finally have Willow back… After all of these years!"
"All thanks to me, of course."
"But…" Rox looks around a bit, pretending to brush dirt off of her clothes.
"Willow…"
"She's… fine! Fine."
"…."
"I…" She clears her throat.
"It's not fine. She… It…"
"…Fucking Poetnix."
"He did this to her… He made her this way…"
"She would never attack me like that! She– She was just so excited!"
"Y-Yeah…"
She takes in a deep breath.
"There she is! Say hello Willow!"
"Hrrrggh…" She only glares at Rox.
"Don't… Child me…."
"Sorry Willow! Haha!"
"It has been years since we last spoke! How are you?"
"Grrrgh… Hhrggh…."
"Oh silly you! Getting drool everywhere! Are you hungry?"
"…Yes." It states, staring at Rox.
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